Friday, January 6, 2017

The Rise of Big Business

It is 1895, and your town is home to a large corporation. The company’s founder and owner, a wealthy man, lives in a mansion on a hill. He is a fair employer but not especially generous. Many townspeople work in his factory. You and other town leaders feel that he should contribute more to local charities and community organizations.
How could this business leader help the town more?

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  1. For being such a fortunate man, he should show that he actually cares about the progression and well being of the town if he actually would've shared his wealth to foundations that could possibly benefit the corporation he owns and those who need the money they lack despite the fact that the towns people work for him. Keep in mind that they could easily overpower him.
    Bryan Lieu 814

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    1. Wow this was absolutely beautifully explained. You have mentioned the benefits of what he could receive along with the town. Good job my boy.
      =3= fam u feel me cah DEVIN XIE

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    2. nice and well explained :\ -RICHARD JUAREZ 802

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  2. This business leader could help the town by donate money for the homeless.Also he could give jobs for homeless people to work in the company.He could help in the town by giving money to develop the town and built more advance stuff. Andy Jiang #814

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    1. I agree with you Andy but you should also add that you should money to the people who really need it not just the poor.
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    2. You could have also said o donate money for other people who need it. Not just poor people but for charity,etc.
      kamo karimov 814

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  3. This business leader should help the town more by giving a little bit of money to the homeless people.He should also donate food and money to local charities and community organizations. He should also give money to create more buildings for people who lost there homes.
    Bryant Ariza 814

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    1. You could have added a bit more such as schools. ZA

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  4. This would help the town in more than one way. Some of the ways he can help the town is by donating to charity. By doing this he is helping a lot if people in need if money. He could give fundings to other businesses so they work more effiecently. He could also give money to schools so the students can get better education.
    To help the town he should built and open a house for elderly and the young who have no where to go

    Zain Abideen 814

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    1. nice yet short
      Qiaoling Wu 814

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    2. Qiaoling do you agree or disagree with the response Zain gave?

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  5. This wealthy owner should help the town more by contribute more to local charities and community organizations. For example, he could donate money or help other who's poor. Also, he could rise the wage for workers to support their family, so the long hour work in bad condition pays off. Last but not least, he could built more structures so it both support the village and his company, such as houses, so more worker will came and became a member of the company.

    ShaoYang Li 814

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    1. i agree with you but check spelling
      Bryant Ariza

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  6. The business leader could expand the companies into different countries as little industries and hired, especially foreign immigrants, people to work in these small industries, and set up the weekly allowance to both receive and pay the money to/from the employees. And the business leader could make people relaxed for a minimum amount of times, then back to the work as they felt a bit energetic. Also, the business leader need to also employ other workers that's available for a certain job they're good at, or they're advance at.
    Qiaoling Wu 814

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    1. I like the many ways you said he could use the money and put it into better use.
      Firuza Tojikulova 814

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    2. Okay. I WILL contribute more to it, THANK YOU MY DEAR FIRUZA
      Qiaoling = -=

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    3. good information just add more on the help that he could give to the homeland people beside jobs.
      YuXinOuYang814

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  7. There are many ways that the business leader could have helped the town more. To begin with, like the paragraph said, he was wealthy and lived in a mansion so instead of keeping all the money to himself, he could have donated it to some good cause such as charity, community organizations,etc. He also had a lot of employees working for him and he kept getting more and more money so at the very least, he could have just raised the employees' wage and help their families a little. Like the paragraph said he wasn't very generous so if he contributed a little more to the town, more people's lives could have been better and happier. So if I had to give him advice, I would advise him to pay more attention to what problems his town is going through and help them out whether that would be donating money or meeting up with other town leaders and make some important decisions that can help the town grow even a little. This is all for the good of his own town so he should at least consider doing some of these.
    Kamo Karimov
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    1. very good on detail and information. Andy j 814

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    2. this was very descriptive and has many reasonable options. Good Job fam u feel me cuh.
      DEVIN =3=

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    3. i feel u cuh =3=

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    4. I disagree with what you have to say because as you said he wasn't as generous the owner could focus more on donating since it would provide many with the special feeling with hope i guess,but with that others would also want to help.Getting good reputation would matter since it would provide the workers to work hard,since they know that they are helping the poor or needy Jack turuy 814

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  8. Considering the fact that he is a very wealthy businessman, he should seek anything that may cooperate in improving his corporation. The town leaders and people can be his benefit once he decides to help out in their charities and organizations. They can assist him with his corporation by raising his power and pride as he donates a partial of his money to improve the town.
    -Devin Xie 814 =3=

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    1. could you explain how the town's people can help him raise his power and pride as you said in the last sentence?
      Peng Jie

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    2. I feel you cuh, it would generally make his reputation and company much better than it would be if he were to remain selfish.
      -Bryan Lieu =3=

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  9. Since towns and communities can benefit greatly from donations of things such supplies and money, the business leader could contribute things such as the products of his business to local charities and community organizations. Thus, this business leader could help the town more. Peng Jie Wu 814

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  10. Donating to charities and community organization will provide the company with good reputation and friendship with those he or she is helping.This also going to provide the people in the town feel special.It would allow the town to fully express them self.Once he is able to donate others would feel the same and would keep the factory and town in a good mood.overall in the town many would want to also help others by building the items that the many who don't have.This would provide some money and good help.If that doesn't work well you could always blackmail.but either way that isn't the best way.The owner could always buy the things that others don't have and make other see that he isn't that bad.However it could backfire. Jack Turuy 814

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  11. Nice thinking on giving money to student so they can get better education. Andy Jiang 814

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    1. I understand what you are trying to say Andy but how that's gonna help the or convince the business man? Because the business man has everything and he won't care who's being educated or not.
      Shoeb Emon 814

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  12. This business leader could help the town more by contributing money to different situation that needs the money. For example, if people are trying to create railroads but they don't have enough money, that business leader can contribute the money that is necessary. He should earn the townspeople trust because they can overpower him. People try to overpower others because they don't like that person. If they don't like the business leader, they could overpower him if they try. We can convince him to contribute money by we can create something that can benefit him in a good way. However, we don't have enough money for that. If we tell him that what we are creating something that will benefit him, he might contribute money to us.

    Gloria Yu 814

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    1. DAMN nice descriptions. Good Job on mentioning his benefits. U feel me cuh
      DEVIN =3=

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    2. That's right Gloria but good luck getting the "leaders" to believe you when you say those words to him/her. =3=

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    3. I disagree with your last sentence because the business leader cannot possibly trust the townspeople when the townspeople themselves cannot trust the business leader, as you mentioned in your third sentence. Peng Jie

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  13. This business leader could help the town more by giving the town people more opportunities in job by having more company and factory,having more and more money, also more to local charities. In addition to that, lf he had a company that work on transportation, such as building railroad and let the railroad to build on their homeland .so that they will had better transportation to make their life easier and faster.Another example is lf they had food and clothing production they will by it easier and cheaper.Last but not the least, he could buy land when he need from the homeland people.
    YuXinOuYang 814

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    1. I agree with you that, better transportation can make their life easier and it could help them transport goods faster.
      YanYing Wu 814

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  14. There many ways this business leader could help the town more. To start off, if he cared about the town, he would've given his extra money to charities to help the poor and local communities. This change of using his money this way would make a big improvement.
    Firuza Tojikulova 814

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    1. Too short. Explain more. Explain how the people can convince him to contribute money. Give examples of what he can contribute money for.

      Gloria Yu 814

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    2. Good Job Firuza! I agree hat he should give money to charities. Try to elaborate more to this idea.
      -Denise Cruz 814

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    3. I agree with you guys just add more deatails add gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooD
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  15. The business leader could help the town more by offering more job to the town and contribute more on the local charities. He can also built more railroad so they can transport their goods faster and travel faster.He can contribute to more different business so the town will have more job and he can become more wealthier.
    YanYing Wu 814

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  16. The business leader could help the town by showing that he actually cares about the company, and share his wealth to the town. He can donate money to the poor people; foods to the community. He can creates more buildings for the homeless people, and make sure that they have enough elements to survive. Or, he can build a open house for the homeless people. He can also creates more jobs for the people who don't have jobs to work on. However, he should keep in mind that he can always lost his power if he treat people incorrectly.
    Rui Xin Lin 814

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    1. I agree, he should care about his company, nd share his wealth.

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  17. The business leader can help the town more by giving more jobs to the people. It can also give more money to the local charities since there are many poor people who can't afford house and food. He can build a shelter for the homeless people and let them work in the factories. The business leader can donate some money to the school to help the students have a better education. Lastly, He can make the work time shorter, so people can work on other things or jobs to earn some more money.
    Michelle Lin 814

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  18. since he was a wealthy business man so the product that he make money of could be something that was use widely in the country. he could sell his product to the town at a low price that the town people could afford and also he could import more industrial to the town.lastly he could built more factory in the town to expand his company and more town people could be hired and having jobs. by zhichenglin 814

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  19. For the townspeople, the wealthy man's contribution would assist the progress of the town. The wealthy man could use a part of his wealth and donate it to the charities, allowing countless people to receive the money that would assist them in their own ways. He could also fund scientific researches that may lead to new shocking discoveries. Supplying the town with money will make advancements and these advancements might eventually help the wealth man to become either famous or billionaires as a guy who assisted his town. The wealthy man should also be cautious in how he treats the townspeople because they could go on strike that might make him lose his business.
    --Your man,
    Andy Zheng 814

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  20. The filthy rich business leader could help the town by contributing to donating money to those in need. The money could advance the town buy making and creating new technology to share with others that could make life safer and easier. Also, the money that was donated could repair houses for those people that could not afford to, help give homeless food and water, and give the homeless clothing. The leader could have use the money to create more public schools for those children who couldn't afford to travel there. The money can be use on medicine which could help the sick people be cured. To let the leader contribute to all these helpful things, bribe would be the best option to get him to do them.
    Lillian Guo

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  21. It would be quite difficult to convince someone to be more helpful when they have had everything almost all their life. Something that might convince him to donate is to show him some of the extreme harsh conditions that people are living in. Moreover, something else that can convince him is by giving him a similar tough experience that many people are going through in his town. I would have some suggestions for this business leader to help the people in the town. One thing that he can do is that he can do is donate some part of the profits he makes from his company to charities. Another thing that this businessman can do is help the people in his community. This can be done by helping people repair their homes or construct better homes. Further, he can give kids that cant afford to go to school an opportunity to. This can be done by building schools that kids can actually attend.
    -Densie Cruz 814

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  22. Around 1895 a business man was a pretty powerful man, he could contribute to the town many ways, for instance, organization. To began with, he can invest in money in a community or a group where they collecting money to build roads. This will convince the businessman as well as help the residence because if the road is build then the product that are made in the factory can go for sell or for trade quickly. Correspondingly, the residence will be able to travel fast and easy.
    Shoeb Emon 814

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    1. Additionally, if he helps the organisation with as I said roads by donating money and if that helps the residence than the people would be willing to work in a factory with such a generous leader.
      Shoeb Emon 814

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  23. If I were one of the leaders of this town, one thing i would ask this business leader for is a town hall building. This man makes a lot of money off of us, and we only get paid the 1/10 of all the money you make. So, in return for this, we want a town hall for any of the purposes we wish.

    Mohamed Helal 814

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  24. there are many ways how the town leader cab help the town more than he already does, however he's not exactly generous. one solution for this situation is to make the leader agree with/ or collaborate with the construction of a new town school. this was not an easy task the fact that the leader didnt really help the town, but the people that worked for him. having a new school will benefit many families for their children would be able to attend to and with tht, families can learn from their own children. but making the leader agree with such statement was not easy. therefore i believe tht the people in the town should agree on a plan tht wouldnt result in violence, or anything damaging. the best way which i think it will work id for the people to start rebelling with the working hours, until he decides to start the construction.since the town people are the people tht keep the factory working .

    joceline aguilar 814

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    1. I agree that it is not easy to persuade a guy who is rich, however the benefit of being able to convince him are good because if you do he may donate to charities to support the town.
      Tina zhang 813

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  25. Since this business leader was wealthy and powerful, then he can help the town by offering workers a better working conditions.He can also offer a settlement house for people who are in need. However, it's clear that this business leader would not just contribute goods without gaining benefits because he's not generous. Therefore, he can offer this settlement house to homeless people,these people would work for him in return. Moreover, the business leader can also use safe capitals, the tools that a factory need in order to work, so he can reduce the pollution.

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  26. By donating to charities and organization in the town, this businessman would help countless amount of townspeople. For example,the money he provided would be use to build schools to help shape the townsman children future. Also, the money can be use to provide the townsman with necessity they need. Because of his action, this benefit him as well. Through the towns people perspective, they would change their mind on from their old perspective and the businessman would be praised for his work. eventually, the word might spread and other people would also praise him, making him a respected but wealthy businessman.
    Jackie Wong 8-14

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  27. This business leader can help the town by contributing to charities,by doing this it can help improve the town that this man lives in. For living a lavish life this man could help others by building more houses or shops for others. Building shops could helped the unemployed in the town get money to help support their family.While, helping charities could help fund hospitals with more equipment's and can help improve the inventions made to make life easier for people. He can donate some money to people who needs it and to fund shops. - Jessica Lin 814

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  28. If I were one of the town leaders trying to get this business man to do something for us, I would ask him for a raise. Yeah, he does pay us well, however, our payment for the whole entire town of hundreds of employees is only about 10 percent of all the money that comes;while he gets to keep the other 90 percent for himself. So here is our proposition:we would like an extra 5 percent payment. So out of all the money that comes to you, we now want a 15 percent payment for the whole town instead of 10. Without our people working in your factory, you are nothing, so its either this, or we quit. Hopefully, we can come to an agreement.

    Ekaterina Kim 814

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  29. It'a a quality explanation. I agree with you because it's really unfair that the workers are working extremely hard for the business man and 90% of the money is going to the business man and only 10% are being distributed to the workers.
    Shoeb Emon 814

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  30. The way the wealthy man could help the town is by as stated supporting charities and also by building structures to help the town in ways such as to help the town's economy also the wealthy man could give possible "batter pay" for most people , build schools , build other such things that could possibly increase the towns wealth and its state of education. Also the wealthy man could be generous to the poor and also to kids who are orphans(if there are any) and give them shelters and and education.
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    1. I agree with you and the wealthy man should try to increase the city's wealth, education, and give back to the poor citizens and orphans.-Jamal 802

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    2. I agree with the idea that the wealthy man should help the community by givivng money for education,and shelthers. Md Ratul 802

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  31. The business leader can give the homeless a chance for them to work in the factory. Or the business leader can donate to charity and increase the pay for the workers.

    Xing Huang Qiu 802

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    1. What kind of charity should he donate to?. And how much pay for workers should he increase?. Md 802

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  32. It will be hard to ask a wealthy man who is not that generous at all, but since citizens are working in his factory, he should give back to this town. For example, people are getting not even close to the amount of money he's getting, so he should donate some o his money to charity or give the town what it really needs. -Jamal 802

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  33. 1.This business leader could help the town even more with his power. He or she can donate to the village, build school and even send money, cloth and food to the poor family of the town.

    Zhi Wei Zhang 802

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  34. For those townspeople, the richest man should assist the progress of the town and make it better.Those rich man can use a part of their wealth and donate it to the charities to help those homeless people to receive the money that would help them in their own ways of survive.They can also fund to those scientific researches to lead them to discover something new. Those wealthy man give out some or their wealth to help town to get something better for education.
    BY WeiChen 802

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    1. I agree with you on that the richest men should use part of their money to donate poor people, this action will be helpful to the town.
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  35. I agree with you because it's really unfair that the workers are working extremely hard for the business man and 90% of the money is going to the business man and only 10% are being distributed to the workers.
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    1. i agree with you, because the business man should give a little more money to the workers cause they worked very hard on the job. -Caojiewu 802

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  36. The wealthy man can help the town by donating money to the people. The man could help the town by givings that the poor need. He could give jobs to homeless people since he does own a company. He could also help the town by donating to make people lives safer, give money to make new residental buildings and help the town where it needs help like the slums. He could build a new hospital for kids with severe disease. Md Ratul 802

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  37. The business leader can help the town by donating more money.The poor people can get these money and use this money for their children to have a better education. Or he can offering more job to the people that were homeless, poor. Kelly Xiao 802

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    1. I agree with you- jinlingzheng802

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    2. I agree that you explain that he can offered jobs to people who are homeless or poor to let them to earn money and had a different life instead of just lying on the street and everyone will think the homeless people can't do anything.
      Wen Jian Lin class 811

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  38. If i was one of the townspeople right now i would maybe gather a group and talk or put up posters saying that the wealthy man should use some of his money and invest in local communities, programs, and give us a raise. The people of the town works in your factories. And if they quit your worth nothing. So treat the community better.Contribute to local charities, programs,and community organizations. Christopher Mills 802.

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    1. i disagree i rather not get a bullet through my head, but i understand that people would do alot of things for a better pay and such for a better life
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  39. The business leader can help the town by giving money to the ones need or he could increase the paying to his workers. Other way is that giving the homeless a chance to work. He can also build more shelters for homeless's.
    -AndyLi 802

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  40. also that they can donate stuffs to the poors and things that can help them make a better life.
    chen xi shi 802

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  41. The bussiness man can help by contributing to alot of charities around the town that might help improve the town. For example, one of those things can be schools, which is going to help the local kids get a better education. He can also help by giving money for building new things like buildings for people to live in and also roads for people to travel faster and more efficiently. And if the business man think that he is gonna give out all of his money to the town he can just give a percentage of the money to the town and the rest he can just keep to himself.
    Somaia Sarker
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  42. This businessmen can help improve this town by raising the payment in the factories, this can make the economy better for the town and this action don`t really impact the money that the men get. Also he can build helpful buildings in the town to make the town better, for example like schools, small banks, and large markets.

    -Eric wu 802

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  43. There are many ways that the business owner could've helped the town. To begin with, he could've donated part of profit to charities to show that he cared about the progression however he is not exactly a generous man. Another thing that he should've done is give something back to his employees to at least show them that he is grateful to have them. If he does give more money in then that money would make a big improvement. The money would've been used to build better schools and fund hospitals with better equipment for better health. The business leader and the townspeople should come to an agreement to prevent any type of violence to happen.
    Nathaly Salas 802

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  44. The way this lavish man can help the town is to give some of the people work too bring wealth to their family.Another way can help the town is donate some percent of his money to charities or build house for people who can't have one stable.When your wealthy man you can help others people become like you or better.Give them a chance you might not had. Marcos SAUCEDO 802

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  45. The business man should donate money to the people who were trying very hard, because they are working very hard to make money.The business man should help solving problems that the people face in the town. People in the town worked extremely hard for the money and the business man only gave them small amounts of money. The business man could give them more money and earn their trust if they wanted cause something bad like fighting and stealing. -Caojiewu 802

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  46. This buisness man could donate money to his town so people in need could get help. The man is very fortunate and has allot of power. Also he could give money to he town so they could advance with technology. Finaly, this man could build schools and public parks for the poor familys of the town and give back because of the fact that people work hard for him.

    Richard Juarez 802

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  47. This wealthy man can donate more money to raise the economy of his town, so the town leaders have more money to support the poor. Also can send money to the education departments to help given supply to every schools and books to library this help the children and future world to a Civilized society. -JinlingZheng 802

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  48. The business leader can help the town more by donating to charities and community organization. The money can be donated to those who are in need and giving jobs to the poor so they can get out of there current spot there in. He can build a building to provide necessary things a human need, like water,food,shelter,clothing and etc. He could build a school so kid can have a better education and future -Vicky Wang 802

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  49. for such a wealthy man he did not contribute to the people lower than him.he could have gave his workers a higher payment because the workers are the ones working for him,also without the workers working for him he is nothing.for this man to help the town is donate some of his earnings to built house or donate to the poor

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  50. I automatically disagree with the town leaders because, i can make an educated guess that this corporation is the reason this village had become a town, the business leader raised the employment rate in this town and paid fair wages to his employees and i assume he is also the reason that this town is well known to other people, making it a prime trade point for the product being produced by the corporation. But if i were to to chose the side of the town i would agree with town leaders that the business leader should donate to charities to help the own prosper, if the leader dos not want to donate money, the leaders should persuade the corporation to donate their product to the village to make the town grow, this also helps the corporation, the town would grow meaning more settlers would travel to settle in the town meaning more employees for the corporation. this would eventually attract other corporations to use their product here seeing the towns growth such as connecting the town to other cities using railroads for transportation of cargo and passenger between the city and town, steel would used to build stronger and larger buildings in the town, electricity used to light their homes. soon the inevitable would take place and the town would become a city and with it will come a city's problems, this would show how strong the corporation is and how strongly it can support the town, i still agree that the leaders are trying to bite off more than they can chew. Alvin Gaine 802

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  51. If a business leader help the town he lives in he would improve his live and the live of others. He could give money to hospitals so the can get better machines to help the sick people. He can also give money to charities so they can build buildings and stores so they can make more money.He can also help build schools for the kids that dont go to school so they can have an eductaion.

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  52. This business leader can help the town by contributing to the charities so people in the town would think he is a good leader and they would listen to him.Also, he could donate his money and food to the homeless and give money to build a house for the homeless.jialinwu802

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  53. This business leader can help contribute to the community by building houses for poor people to live. Also he could also raise pays for his worker. So they can have more money to help support their family. He could also help and put his money in the charity.
    Wendy Yang 811

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    2. can u add more

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    3. I agree with you because if the workers need a raise then he should give them a raise
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    4. I agree with you because he could raise there payment so that they could help there families and kids get a better education - Kathy fung 811

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  54. The wealthy person should so his respects to the people who lives in the town cause they work for him. They help him get money.He should donate his some of him money to the homeless or the bums on the streets so they people would respect him more.


















    Lee Wang 811

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    2. I like your response
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    3. i agree with wendy and the wealthy man can also hire more people to work for him too.
      Annie Chen 811

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    4. I agree with you about donating money but you should really check your grammar and spelling
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      Sabina Yahyaeva 811

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    5. I agree with you because he could help so many people on the streets and you could add more

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    6. kathy fung 811

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    7. i agree with wendy and i also think that the man should let the people to work for him instead of giving them more because if the man just give them the money but the will use the money and they will be still poor. mqj 811

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  55. The business leader can help the town by being a good leader. He can help people that's poor in the town and pay hospitals money so then they can help more people. By helping people in the hospital with healing, people will think that he is a good leader. The business leader can also build more houses for the people that's homeless so the homeless people will have a shelter to live in. The business leader can also offer more jobs so the the people that doesn't have a job and can't feed their family can have a job.
    Annie Chen 811

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    1. Same idea at building a hospital to help people at healing and help people who is in accident.
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    2. I agree with you because he could save people from off the streets by giving them houses and give more jobs to people who need it - Kathy fung 811

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    3. I agree with you because is someone just got hit by a car, they can be save because of your money.
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    4. I agree with you because he could help save more lives and help those who are in need as well as giving them a home and help them have more opportunities for jobs. -Xiao Ting Li 811

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  56. The business leader helped the town more because that the wealthy man donates more money to help the economy in the town. He can built schools, house or even hospital to help be get easier and safer to travel in the town if any accidents happened to them. The wealthy man can built schools to help the students to get educated and learn about the past and to learn economic stuffs. Also he can invite people to join him to create many new things or new inventions to let people to have a goo future. In addition, the wealthy man can built houses to the people who are homeless to help their town doesn't have any homeless people around on the street.
    Wen Jian Lin Class 811

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    1. i agree with you because then childrens can have a good education that can help our country. Also he could save lives.-Xiao Ting Li 811

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  57. the business leader can show that he cares because he can start to build things that people ask for like make a school for kids to have there education give money to the health centers so they can start to help out more sick people and give money to the poor so they can get food and the business leader can start building homes for the poor so the people who are poor can have a safe place to sleep and he should give money for charity.Also the business leader should give the money for the poor so they can have the medical help so they can be health.The business leader could also give out food to all the hospitals so they an give it to the sick people and give it to a family that needs food.
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    2. I agree with you because many kids and parents could suffer without shelter and food and water to survive and the business leader could provide money to fund for people to have what the really need. Sabrina Basant 811

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  58. this business leader can help the town by donate money to the city hospitals for them to get good machines so their will be less people being sick and he can help the poor people to have jobs in his factory so they can have better life, and they can help him get more money. also he can help the children that get lose and have place for them to live.---mengqingjiang 811

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    1. I agree with you because he cold help so many people in so many ways by donating money to the hospitals to save more lives. - kathy fung 811

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    2. This is interesting because he could help people in many different ways and the problems they face and to donate money/raise money for workers so they have a better life.

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  59. The business person should contribute to the town by helping the poor people in the neighborhoods. He could also donate some of his money to charities to help a good cause. Also he could help rebuild the town and make it better by building houses for some of the very poor families and giving them a job at his factory. He could also build new schools so that the kids will have a better place to learn and be educated. Plus he could also help build fields to help farmers plant crops to help there town and there peoples. I think this is how he should help his town.- Kathy fung 811

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    1. I agree because the rich person can donate,help the poor by giving food,or build a place where they can stay

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    3. I agree with you because he should use the money he has to the benefit the people in his town.

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    4. I agree with you lee wang your information is very valid

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  60. This business leader can help the town by being in charities and helping them because he can help the town and people and they are going to find him as good leader

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  61. I think the person who leads the business should contribute into the town because they might be the only one is money in the town. Also they own the business the effects the town in a good or bad way. He could donate,build a place for the poor to stay,or etc.

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    1. . I agree WITH U BECAUSE IN ORDER TO BECOME A STRONG LEADER U WILL ALSO NEED A STRONG COMMUNITY. IN ORDER TO HAVE A STRONG COMMUNITY PEOPLE WOULD NEED TO BECOME A BIG FAMILY AND HELP EACH OTHER. SO I THINK THE MEN SHOULD DO MORE CHARITY AND BUILD HOUSES FOR PEOPLE THAT CAN NOT AFFORD IT
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  62. There are many ways for the business owner to contribute and help the town. The business owner can donate to charity to help people who are homeless. For example, he could buy food, water, clothing, a temporary shelter, and some money for them to start their new life. The business owner can also help out the town organization by donating money. The town organization would use the money to make the town a better place. For example, they can expand the town, hire people for better sanitation, etc. Overall, if the business owner would donate, he would be helpful to the town.
    -Wei Zhuang 811

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    1. I agree that he can donate money or food to the poor which will make it easier for them or give them clothes and money

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    2. i agree with you because you say the way he helps to improved the town and good thing, positive for all people so i agreed!

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  63. I adisagree with the town leaders because, this corporation is the reason this town had become a business leader that raised the employment rate in this town and paid.

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  64. The towns business leader can help the town because he can provide money and donate to the people who are in need of shelters and food. This business leader has the money to help out charities for the better. For the people that live in the town but, are not provided with a home, the business leader can loan money to that person and help them have a roof over their heads. Sabrina Basant 811

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    1. I agree with you because he could use his money to help others instead of using it all o his own - kathyfung811

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  65. The leader can help the town by contributing to the charities so people in the town would think that the leader is a good guy and would listen to him. The people also might donate money to the homeless people. If the leader help the people and build the building and new stuff then the people in that would help and also do the same.

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    1. I agree with you because if you donate to the charities, the charities can help the other help that needs help.Andy Chen 811

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    2. I agree with your explanation jason because donating money to homeless people in charities is a good way to be a good person instead of being greedy, selfish, and stinking richer than everybody in the town. It can benefit the town so they can be helped and live better. Nicole Mo 811

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  66. This business man could help the town by donating to charity. He could help the homeless by giving them a loan. He could help the areas that need help, for example if there is a problem like leaking pipes, he could help them fix the pipes. He could build orphanages. He could listen to the people and hear their problems, and then help out their problems because if he lives in a mansion on a hill he probably doesn't know about the problems going on. If he sees that his workers pay checks are not enough he could give them a raise so then they can take care of their families.
    Sabina Yahyaeva 811

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    1. I agree because donating can help the poor like give them food,clothes,water,or even shelter.He can even build a place where they can stay

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    2. I agree with you Catherine because he should build A place where they should live
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  67. The busisness leader can help the town by donate money to the charities.And he can also help the people that are poor/he can help the people who faced lots of problems.This business man could have done he a lot he could have also raise the payment for his workers in his factories.

    Nabeel Mohammad 811

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    1. nabeel this is very interesting
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    2. can you add some more please like how else can the business owner do good deeds for the town people who might his help. -Nicole Mo 811

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    3. its interesting because how you said that it can help the poor and people who are having problems and people in factoeris
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  68. I think that the business owner can help by giving his workers a well raised credit for helping him do more work. Most of the people of the town can have help from the business owner's charity that helps the children in need of help or peoples' child. -Nicole Mo 811

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  69. The business leader can help the town by improving the way he lives and helping people in his town.He can give money go to charities and donate to the people that actually need it.He has a lot of money that he does not need and he improve peoples lives by getting better machines to help the town.He can help by building a better place for the people to be in .

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    1. i THINK WHAT U ARE SAYING IS APPROVAL BECAUSE IN MY OPINION I THINK THE MEN COULD IMPROVE HIS MACHINES AND MAKE IT BETTER. BUT U IN THIS PARAGRAPH DID NOT EXPLAIN HOW IT WILL CONTRIBUTE TO THE PEOPLE.
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    2. i kike what u said but who r u where is your name
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  70. The fortunate business leader can help the town by donating money to those in need. They can use the money to attend school and have a successful education that might one day change the world. Also the business leader can contribute money to the city. his money can help our country become better and more powerful. for example they can use the money to help build more railroads and invent new things that can change lives and create a big impact to our country.
    Xiao Ting Li 811

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    1. Donating money would help the poor lives for some time


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  71. The business leader should donate money to the charities or he can give shelter to people that are homeless, and he can give out foods to people that don't have food.He can also give people jobs so they can get money to buy food or get a place to live in. Andy Chen 811

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    1. Andy, I agree with you, but what kind of jobs can he give to the people?
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    2. i like what you wrote like giving more money and gaveing out food
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  72. This business leader can help the town more by spending his money on schools and hospitals. When he spends money on schools and hospitals they will be able to use better machines. Also he could be more generous by giving better pay to townspeople that work in his factory. Finally, he can donate money to the town's homeless people.
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    1. YES, I AGREE WITH YOU! but you can add more details on spending money to more poors... although you say spending money to hospital and schools but you can be more organized than that! good!

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  73. He is a wealthy business man who are fair to employers,but he is generous who doesn't paid money to employers... many employers works in his factory and there are many other leaders included himself... town leaders and townpeople think he should help the town to do something, in my opinion i think he might need to gave money to poors, to gave money to the people who needed help like no jobs, need foods, he can gave jobs to welcomed more workers to his factory, as many workers there is,the much money he had, then, he can paid the hard working workers money(no low pay! the more hard work the employers worked the more need to be payed!FAIR!), and son on... people think he can be a great guy who donate money to the charities that everyone liked to help him and think he's a great leader that more and more people liked him and help him with the factory,and so, he's happy and so peoples in town are happy living in better life.This tell us that it can be both advance to the business leader and town people...It helps all of them to make a better town, less homeless, more wealthy, and more people happy in better life.

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    2. he is like a selfish man but i mean that town people and town leaders wish he can be generous but he is a little selfish that he is fair and nice but not wanting to spend his money to poors, workers and something like that...

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  74. This business leader can help the town by donating some money to the poor or by giving them some food. He could also fix up the town like fix the street add more street light to make it more safer. The best thing he cloud do is gave more jobs to the town people so they can earn some money and feed their family. Also let them work extra hours so they can earn more money if they need

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  75. This business leader can help the town more by contributing the money to situations that really need it. For example, to give money to the people trying to build railroads or by contributing to charities. He can donate money to raise the economy of his town. He can also give jobs to people that need it so they can have what is necessary. Melanie Carmona 811

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    1. i really like what you said like help the town more by contributing the money to situations that really need it.

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  76. The business leader can contribute more to the town by donating to charities and the community organization. He can raise the pay of the townspeople that work in his factory. He can give the homeless a job in his factory. Also he can donate to the poor, schools ,and etc. It can help improve the education of the children. As well as built buildings and structures because it improves and helps the town develop. -Joey Zhang 811

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  77. The business owner can help the town by contributing to the local charities and community organizations. he can give some of his money to charities to help people. he can do other small business to help people to make money. He can do things to help community by fixing buildings or build more buildings. Sherlyn Ramirez 811

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  78. The business man can help the townsmen by donating money, being generous and giving them a better paying job. In addition, he can keep his town and company organized by helping the townsmen. Since the business man has a mansion, he can help other people that lives in the town with their houses. Such as, expanding it, or fixing it. The business man can also have a party to celebrate his company's success. -Evan 813

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    1. I agree with you Evan because if he helps by giving a better pay the town people can have a better life and the towns people might not have to worry about money.-David 813

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    2. I agree but if the man isn't so generous wont the man want something in return for the money he is giving the towns men . how can the man help with better jobs ? and expanding the land wont always be the answer .and how can having a mansion help the towns men ?
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    3. Really good ^>^ -Evan 813

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    4. I agree with you because since hes rich,he should help out the towns people.Gabriel Aguila 813

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  79. the business owner need to donate to some charities. for example he could donate to the red cross or he can donate to a small business in need and help rebuild homes ect -henry leal 813

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    1. I agree with you, but if the business man donates to the small business, the workers won't work as hard because they are getting payed without doing their job. -Evan 813

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    2. I agreed with henry because donating to business will grow big and then it can grow bigger and bigger. Michael Mei 813

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    3. Evan i disagree if the towns men had a dying company and had a chance to improve they would take that chance and still work at as hard they wouldn't take it for granted
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  80. he can help by giving money to the town for things they need
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    1. Write more man. One sentence isn't enough. -.-

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    2. i agree with you Carlos because with money the town can get things they need -David 813

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    3. i agree the owner need to donate to business in need

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  81. The Business owner can help the town by building homes for people.He can give the town money so they can use it in time of need.He can Show new Business owner what to do for a business.That is what he can do to help the community. -David Munoz 813

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    1. I disagree with you because if the business man gives the people houses, they won't work as much as they used to do.

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  82. The business can help the town by giving or donating some money to the local charities and the town. They can also give money to the poor that lives in the streets or dont have enough money. He can also make stores where people make money. They can also fix houses that look old or they need new ones. Michael Mei 813

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    1. i agree with you because he show a lack of caring to the local charities and the town. But also helping the poor by giving them a better life chance. -Vanessa 813

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    2. i agree with Michael because he could also could give money to poor people.

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  83. the business owner can help the town by contributing to the local charities of the organization. he could have give money to the charities. he can also do other small business to help people.

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  84. He could help by providing homes, donating large amounts of money to charity. He can also donate food to those in need.

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  85. For the company’s founder and owner, and a wealthy men like him, to contribute more to local charities and community organizations he should show lack of caring to his company and to his worker. To go along that, he should help along with his workers and help donate money to the local charities and community organizations.
    -Vanessa 813

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  86. I think that the business owner should help his town by helping his community by giving money to charities and the community organizations.Gabriel Aguila 813

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  87. The owner could donate money to the charities.Can give better jobs for people who needed. Can help new buisness owners with there buisness. Esteban-813

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  88. The business man could help by donating, giving money to the poor and contributing to charities to help the homeless and have more jobs for the townsmen ~Nydia soto 813

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    1. I agree with you because, if he has so much money, why can't he help the poor people, and give them some money so they can eat. Or maybe he should even give them some food, or give people more money to be able to make medicine and so people can help make medicine for the sick people. ~Rebecca Parker 813

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  89. The leader should create charities to help the poor or he should make shelters for the people who don't have homes. He could also give more jobs out so they could earn more money to support themsleves.

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  90. The business owner can contribute more to the town by donating money to the homeless, poor, schools, and etc. Also for situations that are really needed. For Example: he should donate to the people building railroads or by contributing to charities. If he donates money he can change lives and impact a big part to the country. -Yadimar Cruz 813

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  91. he could help by donating money lisining to what his workers have to say alex 813

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  92. There is a a lot of ways that the business leader can help the town.He can donate some of his fortune to the town's local charities and community organizations. By donating to the charities he can help make progress to the town. The charities will be able to help those in need and will be able to give them food and everything they need. The business leader can raise the pay of the workers in his factory so they can work even better.
    -Jiayi Chen 813

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  93. The leader can help the town by contributing to the local charities and community organizations.He can also help by making more jobs.

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  94. the wealthy business man can help the town by using some of his wealth and donating it to a hospital,charities or using it to build houses for the people that don't have a home and spending his free time helping in charities and hospitals -Nadia 813

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  95. I think that the business owner can help the town by helping everyone out equally. For example, when there's a problem going around in town he should try his best to solve it. He should give some of his money to different charities, and do his best to be there whenever he is needed. Also, he has people working for him, he should at least have the decency to pay them with the price they truly deserve, and see how hard they work, and their struggles. He should be decorous, and improve the town by fixing old and broken buildings, and make more space, land wise, and create more and stronger buildings.

    ~Rebecca Parker 813 :o)

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  96. i think the business leader can help his more by giving money to charity and give less work and more money because he wealthy and has a lot of money and make the factory more safe
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  97. This business leader should help by being apart of the towns organizations and more generous to show that he is nice enough to make a town the way the towns people suggest it to be.He should be a little strict to tolerate the other towns problems to have power to keep there town strong.The leader should also help other people such as charity for the money because he is a business leader
    Kernan Kong 821

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